1. Finish Giver by next Tuesday.

2. MLA Review

3. How to fix the Perfect paragraph.

4. HW-  Perfect paragraph: fixed.

1.              Remove and vary transitions.

2.              Combine and lengthen sentences.

3.              Add extra fact/opinions.

4.              Mix the sentence types.

5.              Re order the sentences.

6.              Find better words.

Transitions List